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	<description>Poetic pragmatism, neo-transcendentalism, bikes, burritos, basketball.</description>
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		<title>Comment on Why does cycling in SF suck more now than in 1994? by dong</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/2010/09/cycling-in-sf-sucks/comment-page-1/#comment-7798</link>
		<dc:creator>dong</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Aug 2011 08:06:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>When I ride a bike, walk, or drive a car, cyclists are predictably the most unpredictable element out there.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When I ride a bike, walk, or drive a car, cyclists are predictably the most unpredictable element out there.</p>
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		<title>Comment on They don’t think it be like it is, but it do. by Anonymous</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/2010/07/oscar-gamble/comment-page-1/#comment-7422</link>
		<dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Jun 2011 10:13:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>sickest quote ever</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>sickest quote ever</p>
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		<title>Comment on ENGLISH SENTENCES WITHOUT OVERT GRAMMATICAL SUBJECTS by Doug LeMoine</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/english-sentences-without-overt-grammatical-subjects/comment-page-1/#comment-7415</link>
		<dc:creator>Doug LeMoine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Jun 2011 18:29:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, of course.</description>
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		<title>Comment on ENGLISH SENTENCES WITHOUT OVERT GRAMMATICAL SUBJECTS by Roxy</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/english-sentences-without-overt-grammatical-subjects/comment-page-1/#comment-7344</link>
		<dc:creator>Roxy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jun 2011 13:44:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Brilliant! May I post a link to this on my blog please? Best - R.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Brilliant! May I post a link to this on my blog please? Best — R.</p>
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		<title>Comment on ENGLISH SENTENCES WITHOUT OVERT GRAMMATICAL SUBJECTS by Warm Words</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/english-sentences-without-overt-grammatical-subjects/comment-page-1/#comment-7298</link>
		<dc:creator>Warm Words</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 31 May 2011 21:31:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] full paper is here; the journal Language credits it with being the first satirical linguistics paper.      Cancel [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] full paper is here; the journal Language credits it with being the first satirical linguistics paper.      Cancel [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on ENGLISH SENTENCES WITHOUT OVERT GRAMMATICAL SUBJECTS by Sooz</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/english-sentences-without-overt-grammatical-subjects/comment-page-1/#comment-7297</link>
		<dc:creator>Sooz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 31 May 2011 18:35:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Mark, I agree.  It is indeed an imperative insofar as the implied subject is not &quot;you&quot; but rather &quot;god&quot;, &quot;the universe&quot;, &quot;fate&quot;, &quot;the powers that be&quot; etc.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Mark, I agree.  It is indeed an imperative insofar as the implied subject is not “you” but rather “god”, “the universe”, “fate”, “the powers that be” etc.</p>
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		<title>Comment on About me by simon</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/about/comment-page-1/#comment-7295</link>
		<dc:creator>simon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 31 May 2011 14:04:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>need to ask you how much you&#039;d cost to recreate your london kerning map into two other cities, like Beirut and Cairo or Dubai and Abu Dhabi... (middle eastern cities).

Dude, i work for Leo Burnett Dubai - but we ain&#039;t loaded, so please don&#039;t think we&#039;ve got money coming out of our ears.

Can&#039;t wait to hear from you

Simon</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>need to ask you how much you’d cost to recreate your london kerning map into two other cities, like Beirut and Cairo or Dubai and Abu Dhabi... (middle eastern cities).</p>
<p>Dude, i work for Leo Burnett Dubai — but we ain’t loaded, so please don’t think we’ve got money coming out of our ears.</p>
<p>Can’t wait to hear from you</p>
<p>Simon</p>
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		<title>Comment on ENGLISH SENTENCES WITHOUT OVERT GRAMMATICAL SUBJECTS by Mark</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/english-sentences-without-overt-grammatical-subjects/comment-page-1/#comment-7289</link>
		<dc:creator>Mark</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 30 May 2011 10:32:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Quang is too quick to write off god as the underlying subject. He assumes &#039;the only god&#039; is implied. It could easily be a different god or &#039;an unknown power&#039;. Consider the following:

May Zeus shit on God.
May an unknown power damn God.
May Suffering Jesus shit on Baby Jesus. (Anachronistic, but grammatically correct.)

This allows &#039;fuck you&#039; subtleties of intention and interpretation:

May Freyja fuck you!
May Thor fuck you!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Quang is too quick to write off god as the underlying subject. He assumes ‘the only god’ is implied. It could easily be a different god or ‘an unknown power’. Consider the following:</p>
<p>May Zeus shit on God.<br />
May an unknown power damn God.<br />
May Suffering Jesus shit on Baby Jesus. (Anachronistic, but grammatically correct.)</p>
<p>This allows ‘fuck you’ subtleties of intention and interpretation:</p>
<p>May Freyja fuck you!<br />
May Thor fuck you!</p>
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		<title>Comment on ENGLISH SENTENCES WITHOUT OVERT GRAMMATICAL SUBJECTS by Warm Words &#124; Futility Closet</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/english-sentences-without-overt-grammatical-subjects/comment-page-1/#comment-7283</link>
		<dc:creator>Warm Words &#124; Futility Closet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 29 May 2011 14:55:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] full paper is here; the journal Language credits it with being the first satirical linguistics [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on ENGLISH SENTENCES WITHOUT OVERT GRAMMATICAL SUBJECTS by Nathan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Nathan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 May 2011 15:20:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;He has an outside-the-box thinking approach, yet conforms to standards set therein to make processes more efficient, which in turn effectively reduce downtime.&quot;

This sounds a bit awkward. This makes it seem like the act conforming to the &quot;standards set therein&quot; makes the processes more efficient. Using &quot;reduce&quot; links the reduction of down time more strongly to the processes than to him. Part of the awkwardness can be mitigated by simply changing &quot;which in turn effectively reduce&quot; to &quot;which effectively reduces&quot;, but this links the reduction of down time to his approach rather than the processes.

&quot;He uses an outside-the-box thinking approach, yet conforms to the standards set therein, to make processes more efficient, which effectively reduces downtime.&quot;

I think this sounds less awkward. I think this would be slightly strange in writing. To make it more natural for writing, you could use parenthesis around &quot;yet conforms to the standards set therein&quot;. For written language, this is fine, but for it to sound natural in spoken language, I think &quot;which effectively reduces downtime&quot; would have to be used as an aside or an afterthought. If you need more emphasis on reducing downtime, you could either put it into its own sentence, or move it to the front of the sentence. 

Hope this helps. Also, I&#039;m neither linguist nor grammar expert, so it&#039;s possible I made a mistake or that someone else can offer a more thorough explanation.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>“He has an outside-the-box thinking approach, yet conforms to standards set therein to make processes more efficient, which in turn effectively reduce downtime.”</p>
<p>This sounds a bit awkward. This makes it seem like the act conforming to the “standards set therein” makes the processes more efficient. Using “reduce” links the reduction of down time more strongly to the processes than to him. Part of the awkwardness can be mitigated by simply changing “which in turn effectively reduce” to “which effectively reduces”, but this links the reduction of down time to his approach rather than the processes.</p>
<p>“He uses an outside-the-box thinking approach, yet conforms to the standards set therein, to make processes more efficient, which effectively reduces downtime.”</p>
<p>I think this sounds less awkward. I think this would be slightly strange in writing. To make it more natural for writing, you could use parenthesis around “yet conforms to the standards set therein”. For written language, this is fine, but for it to sound natural in spoken language, I think “which effectively reduces downtime” would have to be used as an aside or an afterthought. If you need more emphasis on reducing downtime, you could either put it into its own sentence, or move it to the front of the sentence. </p>
<p>Hope this helps. Also, I’m neither linguist nor grammar expert, so it’s possible I made a mistake or that someone else can offer a more thorough explanation.</p>
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		<title>Comment on ENGLISH SENTENCES WITHOUT OVERT GRAMMATICAL SUBJECTS by Stephen obodai anderson</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/english-sentences-without-overt-grammatical-subjects/comment-page-1/#comment-7192</link>
		<dc:creator>Stephen obodai anderson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 May 2011 21:11:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like those words</description>
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		<title>Comment on Architecture / Teddy Cruz’s urban acupuncture by Architizer Blog &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Cruz and Lynn: 2010 US Artists Fellows</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/2007/04/architecture-teddy-cruzs-urban-acupuncture/comment-page-1/#comment-5923</link>
		<dc:creator>Architizer Blog &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Cruz and Lynn: 2010 US Artists Fellows</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Dec 2010 18:31:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Photo collage on urban density by Teddy Cruz. Via Doug LeMoine. [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on ENGLISH SENTENCES WITHOUT OVERT GRAMMATICAL SUBJECTS by Anonymous</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/english-sentences-without-overt-grammatical-subjects/comment-page-1/#comment-5896</link>
		<dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Dec 2010 11:19:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>you can&#039;t, it&#039;s fucked.</description>
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		<title>Comment on Why does cycling in SF suck more now than in 1994? by lynne</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/2010/09/cycling-in-sf-sucks/comment-page-1/#comment-5618</link>
		<dc:creator>lynne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 Sep 2010 15:47:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think the new infrastructure has helped in terms of cars. I&#039;m not that scared of being hit by a car on Market Street anymore, but it seems much more likely that I could have a collision with a cyclist. When I ride a bike, walk, or drive a car, cyclists are predictably the most unpredictable element out there.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think the new infrastructure has helped in terms of cars. I’m not that scared of being hit by a car on Market Street anymore, but it seems much more likely that I could have a collision with a cyclist. When I ride a bike, walk, or drive a car, cyclists are predictably the most unpredictable element out there.</p>
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		<title>Comment on HTML5 disturbingly close to bringing a tear to my eye by Amy Hillman</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/2010/09/html5/comment-page-1/#comment-5602</link>
		<dc:creator>Amy Hillman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Sep 2010 20:23:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is brilliant.</description>
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		<title>Comment on Paul Rand’s business card by Paulo</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/2010/05/paul-rand/comment-page-1/#comment-5567</link>
		<dc:creator>Paulo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Aug 2010 12:10:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What is the name of the font? What is the size?</description>
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		<title>Comment on On the trail of the Meth Capital by CJ Miles</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/2005/12/on-the-trail-of-the-meth-capital/comment-page-1/#comment-5417</link>
		<dc:creator>CJ Miles</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jun 2010 21:18:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I thought West Virginia would be close to being the Meth Capital of the U.S.</description>
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		<title>Comment on Architecture / Teddy Cruz’s urban acupuncture by Ann Matsushima</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/2007/04/architecture-teddy-cruzs-urban-acupuncture/comment-page-1/#comment-5410</link>
		<dc:creator>Ann Matsushima</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Jun 2010 09:05:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Teddy Cruz inspires me to keep mapping, searching for vacant spaces, and exploring the land in which i live! Glad you got to hear him speak</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Teddy Cruz inspires me to keep mapping, searching for vacant spaces, and exploring the land in which i live! Glad you got to hear him speak</p>
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		<title>Comment on Paul Rand’s business card by Doug LeMoine</title>
		<link>http://douglemoine.com/2010/05/paul-rand/comment-page-1/#comment-5366</link>
		<dc:creator>Doug LeMoine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Jun 2010 07:13:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ha! Yeah, it&#039;s true. I was charmed by the notion that he only had two means of access -- the physical address (without a street number, of course) and the phone. It&#039;s somewhat fitting that fax numbers, email addresses -- all of the alternatives we feel compelled to include -- just add complexity and noise.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ha! Yeah, it’s true. I was charmed by the notion that he only had two means of access — the physical address (without a street number, of course) and the phone. It’s somewhat fitting that fax numbers, email addresses — all of the alternatives we feel compelled to include — just add complexity and noise.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Paul Rand’s business card by Dorian Taylor</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dorian Taylor</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Jun 2010 07:10:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>All it needs is a QR code to bring it up to date.

err…</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>All it needs is a QR code to bring it up to date.</p>
<p>err…</p>
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